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Open Poetry #41

Winter Mountain Forest

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-12-07 10:57 PM

      Winter Mountain Forest

   Deep clouds dance
   with a metaphysical moon,
   as bright-frosty moonlight
   gathers our grandest hopes
     and dreams
   on this crisp Winter night,
   in this lovely, snow-etched
     mountain forest,
   where pure happiness sings
   to the mind, heart, and spirit
   of all the finest things…
   that ‘belong’ to no one!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-12-08 04:27 AM

Wonderful...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-12-08 10:57 AM

"where pure happiness sings
   to the mind, heart, and spirit
   of all the finest things…
   that ‘belong’ to no one!"

EA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-12-08 06:35 PM

To no one in particular, but to all, free heavenly gifts of beauty.
A refined piece of poetry.
Deeply enjoyed.
Love,
Margherita

Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

4 posted 2007-12-08 06:41 PM

this reminds me of pablo neruda poem 20. Where he uses the enviroment to describe his soul. Nicely written

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

5 posted 2007-12-09 07:33 PM

D.I. is right... this poem does seem to describe an interior landscape resonating with an external, visible one. Beautifully written, and greatly enjoyed!

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

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