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appreciateion for the gain of loss
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appreciateion for the gain of loss |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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when was it we last said good bye? both our hearts were insulted beyond belief beyond all those changes of pain despair loss but oh true love while you're in the arms of another my greatest joy is hearing you express the happiness you've come to know experience poured into our souls from knowing without knowing zen harmony of our passion leading us to a secret of all secrets we are better for the passion our two hearts shared that once was us.... exclusively intentional gifting the mere logic of life feel me in her.... know the truth that depth of love I once felt in the warmth of your arms and that we are better because of it... it was nice to see you again good byes are great hello's and open doors to other love's that make us better more responsible more... in love with meaning and soul's touch God's purpose in us |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
powerful words leeJ ARCTIC WIND |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ......The depth of freedom from so many human negative emotions and the power of your outlook in this, is overwhelming.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
ahhh...two in one day did I see. Now my day's complete... j. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is a lesson learned when one can appreciate a gain in a loss.  "good byes are great hello's and open doors to other love's that make us better more responsible more... in love with meaning and soul's touch God's purpose in us" ~ Oh, Lee, that was love-ly. ~ as is the remainder of the poem. Love to you, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"good byes are great hello's and open doors" Great perspective! |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
Very good read...well done. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lee, can I just say I'm blown away?! I love this poem for so many reasons, but most of all, I think, because of the metaphysical implications in it. ....jo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
it was nice to see you again good byes are great hello's and open doors to other love's that make us better more responsible more... wonderful words here Lee and very true... thank you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
more... in love with meaning and soul's touch God's purpose in us Wow, you not only are a magnificent poetess, but you also have a big heart. You can accept what is and wish your love well. This is true unconditional love. It sounds like a sacred text. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow woman! what a fine feeling this brought me tonight! I've missed you! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, this was just beautiful my friend, I enjoyed each line of life filled passion and love, not hate but experience and these lines blew me away. more... in love with meaning and soul's touch God's purpose in us Thank you for sharing this my friend. Rick |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
" good byes are great hello's and open doors to other love's that make us better more responsible more... in love with meaning and soul's touch God's purpose in us" So now I know that the reason for my absence was to come back and read this just when I needed to. I've been thinking a lot about "goodbyes" just lately and you've made me realise that they certainly can be good things. You get "right in there", LeeJ and hit a spot of truth. I so enjoyed this penning. |
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