I Am From .... (Patricia's Challenge)

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2007-12-07 01:47 AM

I am from
Parents two
Grandparents four
Siblings five
Aunts seven
Uncles nine
Cousins numerous
Classmates plentiful
Friends abundant
Enemies few
Acquaintances several
Colleagues various
Husband one
Lovers some
Children one
Unknown indefinite
This is where I am from

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (12-07-2007 02:51 AM).]

aziza
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1 posted 2007-12-07 01:54 AM

Have I ever told you
that you make me smile?

I am glad that your parents
had you ... you are a wonderful woman.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-12-07 02:36 AM

thank you Ali... you have a special place in my heart

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

3 posted 2007-12-07 06:12 AM

I am enjoying the different "takes" on this challenge...well done~~

M

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-12-07 06:24 AM

ms R & B..you make me
want to ask so many questions
enjoyed it ms

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2007-12-07 09:29 AM

I like your little list, it made me smile. Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-12-07 09:41 AM

beautiful as your smile...it is so good to read you again....and nice to see you in there, hugs
Lee J.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2007-12-07 10:37 AM

This is wonderful; so many ways to
interpret the original poem...

and so many diverse ways to share!

Well done, Ronnie!

Martie

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8 posted 2007-12-07 11:13 AM

RDB......A different kind of slant on the challenge, much enjoyed.

Margherita
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Eternity

9 posted 2007-12-07 11:20 AM

I think this is quite cute, dear Roniece.
And thank you for the smiles.

For details it's enough to look at your radiance and everything unveils instantly.

Love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2007-12-07 02:47 PM

Very much enjoyed your take on the challenge and I know that what you are is a beautiful poetess m'friend. Lovely writing.

Patricia
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11 posted 2007-12-07 04:09 PM

I do love this. I have read it several times and smiled with each read. And the ending line...fabulous!

Thank you, lovely poet!

Patricia

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

12 posted 2007-12-07 04:12 PM

fine reply to the 'poetic challenge!'

serenity blaze
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13 posted 2007-12-07 04:23 PM

"Husband one
Lovers some
Children one
Unknown indefinite"

This part cracked me up.

Much enjoyed!

Rick
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Victoria, Australia

14 posted 2007-12-07 06:37 PM

Roniece, you have a lovely smile my friend and a cheeky (lovers some). Loved the read and to find out where you are from. Have a wonderful day and be well.

Rick

Lincoln
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15 posted 2007-12-07 07:07 PM

that was neat! enjoyed :p

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2007-12-07 07:59 PM

What's not to love! You are such a sweetie pie!

One look at that engaging smile of yours, and you have others to add to that list!

Sending a big hug of love to you, Roneice!

btw, is one of your uncles named Ron? lol

Linda

Just another Pete
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17 posted 2007-12-08 11:16 AM

What a neat poem, by the end it was going so fast I almost couldnt stop!
Pete.

Artic Wind
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18 posted 2007-12-08 03:44 PM

RDB-

Lovely RDB!

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

19 posted 2007-12-08 09:25 PM

thank you all for your lovely responses... each and everyone of you hold special places in my heart. thank you

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2007-12-09 02:34 PM

"Friends abundant"...seems you have found happiness...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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21 posted 2007-12-09 05:02 PM

thank you James... I count you as one of my 'abundant friends'

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

iliana
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22 posted 2007-12-09 08:02 PM

I agree, this has been a great challenging, drawing out wonderful poems like yours! I can tell you are from a very nice place, Roniece! *hugs*....jo

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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23 posted 2007-12-10 05:03 AM

Thank you sweet Jo... I appreciate your comment... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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