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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2007-12-06 10:50 PM





I Am Winter

(Patricia's Challenge)

I am winter
with a cold, gray sky,
and snowy flakes blowing
-- way up high.

I am spring
with flowers blooming near,
and rain dripping off them
--shaped like a tear.

I am summer
with sun so warm.
My winds blow strong,
in loud, thunder storm.

I am autumn
with leaves that fall.
On cold, chilly nights,
a lonely coyote calls.

ARCTIC WIND

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2007-12-06 10:53 PM


Every season so lovely on you.
Enjoyed your poem.

iliana
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2 posted 2007-12-06 11:44 PM


I think This Diamond said it perfectly -- you do look good! ...jo
aziza
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3 posted 2007-12-07 12:12 PM


Most beautiful
in all your seasons.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-12-07 01:21 AM


I am summer
with sun so warm.
My winds blow strong,
in loud, thunder storm

wonderful Arctic - just wonderful! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2007-12-07 06:10 AM


I like your seasoning

M

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2007-12-07 06:27 AM


enjoyed this AW..
Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2007-12-07 09:30 AM


Beautiful picture-and I'm talking about the ones you painted in words.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-12-07 10:35 AM


ThisDiamond-

Thank you, this challenge has really been fun


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2007-12-07 10:37 AM


IlIanna-

Thank you, i love winter the most

ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine
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10 posted 2007-12-07 10:41 AM



Lovely.

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2007-12-07 10:51 AM


Aziza-

thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-12-07 10:53 AM


RDB-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2007-12-07 10:54 AM


Nakd-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2007-12-07 10:57 AM


Dark-

Thank you, I love seasons, there different colors and beauty

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2007-12-07 10:59 AM


Pilgrimage-

From the name, are you irsh?

And thank you sooooo much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2007-12-07 11:00 AM


Sunshine-

Thank dear sun!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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17 posted 2007-12-07 12:21 PM


Yes, you beautiful soul, you are all of this.

Enchanting.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2007-12-07 12:30 PM


Arctic Wind, each verse was a vivid vignette of that season and very much enjoyed by this reader.

A poem by you is always a pause that refreshes.


Giving you a warm hug and a big smiley face,

EA


Artic Wind
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19 posted 2007-12-07 04:03 PM


Margherita-

Thank you dear friend

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2007-12-07 04:08 PM


EA-

WOW, thank you, You know, when i was writing this poem, thought to myself, because i didn't know what to write, and i thought "how about the seasons of the year" but it took me for ever to figure this poem was going to be about LOL



ARCTIC WIND

Patricia
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21 posted 2007-12-07 04:27 PM


Just lovely. Seasons so beautiful.

Thank you for sharing.

Patricia

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2007-12-07 04:34 PM


Patricia-

Thank you

and thank you for starting this challenge

ARCTIC WIND

lucky
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23 posted 2007-12-07 08:08 PM


A beautiful heart...

thank you, dale

LeeJ
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24 posted 2007-12-07 08:21 PM


ideally written from a spiritual perspective, and truly all colors of the rainbow, or shall I say, changeable seasons....well done.


SmartChick
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25 posted 2007-12-07 08:35 PM


Enjoyed your poem of the season. If I didn't have to get out in the snow, I would love winter. But, since I do, it's a toss up between Autumn and Spring.
Artic Wind
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26 posted 2007-12-07 08:48 PM


Lucky-

Thank you for this lovely response

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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27 posted 2007-12-07 08:52 PM


LeeJ-

Thank you, I love writing about seasons

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2007-12-07 08:55 PM


SmartChick-

Thank you for your sweet replies

ARCTIC WIND

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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29 posted 2007-12-08 05:41 PM


Now this is a fine conception - because the seasons play such a part in our lives, creating, and filling in so many memories.

I also love winter the best, when it's full of snow.

Artic Wind
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30 posted 2007-12-08 05:45 PM


Rosemary-

WOW, thank you !

I LOVE winter!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love to jump in snow, I love drink hot chocolate at night, I LOVE EVERYTHING TO DO WITH SNOW< AND WINTER !!!!!!!!!!!!

I am sooo glad you enjoyed



Oh and we cant forget about CHRISTMAS !!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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31 posted 2007-12-09 02:36 PM


A pleasure to read this...reminds me of the times I went to Big Bear in California...James
Artic Wind
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32 posted 2007-12-09 04:45 PM


JamesMichael-

Thank you!

I love winter!, And this was sooooooo fun to write about!

ARCTIC WIND

moondogz
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33 posted 2007-12-11 10:42 PM


Artic Wind, this is a beautiful poem and I love the way you presented it...thank you for sharing it.
cantrellkm
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34 posted 2007-12-11 10:50 PM


This is a beautiful piece written from deep within your soul.  Every line penned from the heart and pure. Great write. I enjoyed reading this tonight.

<3 Kellie

Lincoln
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35 posted 2007-12-12 01:12 AM


I am spring
with flowers blooming near,
and rain dripping off them
--shaped like a tear.

my favorite

enjoyed this poem!
was wonderful

Rick
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36 posted 2007-12-12 01:31 AM


I just loved every one of your seasons Wind, very much enjoyed, thank you.

Rick

Artic Wind
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37 posted 2007-12-12 09:17 PM


Moon-

Thank you!!!!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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38 posted 2007-12-12 09:18 PM


Cant-

Thank you, and welcome to pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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39 posted 2007-12-12 09:19 PM


lincoln-

Thank you soooooooooo much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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40 posted 2007-12-12 09:21 PM


rick-

Thank you!

I love to read your poetry too!

ARCTIC WIND

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