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I Am Winter (Patrica's Challenge)

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Artic Wind
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I Am Winter

(Patricia's Challenge)

I am winter
with a cold, gray sky,
and snowy flakes blowing
-- way up high.

I am spring
with flowers blooming near,
and rain dripping off them
--shaped like a tear.

I am summer
with sun so warm.
My winds blow strong,
in loud, thunder storm.

I am autumn
with leaves that fall.
On cold, chilly nights,
a lonely coyote calls.

ARCTIC WIND
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ThisDiamond
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Every season so lovely on you.
Enjoyed your poem.
iliana
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I think This Diamond said it perfectly -- you do look good! ...jo
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Most beautiful
in all your seasons.

A
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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I am summer
with sun so warm.
My winds blow strong,
in loud, thunder storm

wonderful Arctic - just wonderful! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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I like your seasoning

M
Dark Stranger
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enjoyed this AW..
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Beautiful picture-and I'm talking about the ones you painted in words.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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ThisDiamond-

Thank you, this challenge has really been fun


ARCTIC WIND
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IlIanna-

Thank you, i love winter the most

ARCTIC WIND
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Lovely.

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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Aziza-

thank you!

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RDB-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND
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Nakd-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND
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Dark-

Thank you, I love seasons, there different colors and beauty

ARCTIC WIND
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Pilgrimage-

From the name, are you irsh?

And thank you sooooo much!

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Sunshine-

Thank dear sun!

ARCTIC WIND
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Yes, you beautiful soul, you are all of this.

Enchanting.

Love,
Margherita
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Arctic Wind, each verse was a vivid vignette of that season and very much enjoyed by this reader.

A poem by you is always a pause that refreshes.


Giving you a warm hug and a big smiley face,

EA

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Margherita-

Thank you dear friend

ARCTIC WIND
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EA-

WOW, thank you, You know, when i was writing this poem, thought to myself, because i didn't know what to write, and i thought "how about the seasons of the year" but it took me for ever to figure this poem was going to be about LOL



ARCTIC WIND
Patricia
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Just lovely. Seasons so beautiful.

Thank you for sharing.

Patricia
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Patricia-

Thank you

and thank you for starting this challenge

ARCTIC WIND
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A beautiful heart...

thank you, dale
LeeJ
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ideally written from a spiritual perspective, and truly all colors of the rainbow, or shall I say, changeable seasons....well done.

 
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