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Devious Intellectual
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0 posted 2007-12-06 04:49 PM


Goodbye?


If stanzas could bleed like the morning sun through white blinds
Perhaps light could be shed and awake the hope that was forsaken
Its not the same without her, sitting here alone is ill-fated
I want to forget her but keep the good memories, she's mistaken

If the syllables could speak in harmony this poem would have wings
It’s hard to pull myself to say, you’re my most beautiful error
Appreciate what you have because it is better than having nothing
I’m a well off poor man looking for closure only finding terror

If words could paint all these walls would be deemed masterpieces
I dust off my cold hands as the ink of my heart start to dry
Regrets are empty emotions so I will still confusingly thank you
Just as a hallmark card is modest read carefully this word; goodbye

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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-12-06 05:09 PM


If words could paint all these walls would be deemed masterpieces


Very touching write.

Love,
Margherita

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