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kudanesh
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2007-12-05 01:03 PM


be for you read this it s not about evry lady in this wourld allot of the are good and upstanding but this is for those that are like in the poem

Ladies of today

The nature of being sexist now here’s a word of many
You can not point out a view not one not any
I do not mean the right to vote I do not mean there pay
Its the way they spend there time now days is it sexist to be a lady

Maybe it was long ago when men were the brutish ones
Know day’s women are more prone to fight than in 1961
It might be drugs or the drink but sometimes not at all
And every time you come out a pub it’s the women that do brawl

Some times it not just women they decide to challenge
The silly things what do they think will happen
You must never hit a girl no this is wrong
Oh wait hold on a minute there acting big and strong

But then a again I hold this to you
What would you say if this next bit happened to you?
If you come out of the pub and you suddenly get hit
And you got k.o.ed by a girl they would not care a bit

If you got knocked out and had fallen to the ground
You never go out again without being laughed out of town
But say you got up and hit here back even if it was just a slap
Then you are now a women beater and you know what comes with that

When that kind of thing starts to travel round
They do not get the whole story so you end up underground
Because none cares if she hits you first because she’s is a girl
She is not a lady any more she’s a goldilocks with curls

You know the story of goldilocks and what she did in there
She broke an entering on the house stole and broke baby bears chair
To me that criminal damage she really was a brute
Gold weren’t hard done by she got away with it cos she cute

So when you are drinking watch you selves out there
You might just get your head kicked in by a bloke with nails and hair
May be I am simply blind and see it the wrong way
The ladies back in 61 are nothing like to day

I know that you are not to stay home and cook all the meals
But at least up hold you own creation you own dam ideals
Like women should not be hit by men so don’t hit us first
Its different if you get a nitwit who tries to nick your purse

Because women all ways say that were Neanderthals
Yet they’re out there screaming and hitting each other with polls
It really doesn’t make since on how it came to be
Were women started fighting and hitting you and me?

So get rid of this sexist lark it doesn’t make any sense
How you can support such a one-way fence
Three times they have to hit be for you can report
A lucky or bad shot to the head will cut your life quite short

This sexist law works only one way round
If you say some thing wrong they'll fight you to the ground
And this is a problem were not saying that you weak
Were all so not saying you have no right to speak?

But at least stop the dame fighting and bring back you own rules
But make them work both ways not just to support your cause
Because I would call it sexist if we call you weak
But if you hit like a bloke you should be jailed for a week

So yes I know that for this I am wrong and some will disagree
But if you look around your self girls then im sure you’ll see
But don’t take this wrongly because im a man
Take it from some real lady try you mum or gran

For there are not many left and few are in the making
But if they hold it back there are some of them there hiding
There is something that most men and im sure they would agree
Instead of dating another bloke they’d rather a lady

any one affended by this (there might be some) i am sorry and if you request i will remove this poem.

© Copyright 2007 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2007-12-06 01:05 AM


Proof reading, correct spelling and punctuation would help.
poetninoit
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since 2007-06-10
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2 posted 2007-12-06 02:03 AM


I totally understand what you are saying. I got punched in the face by one of these ladies last weekend. It's frustrating because you know they know you won't hit them back. It's a good poem with a fresh, original topic that I can definately relate to.
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-12-06 11:44 AM


This is too complex a theme, to say you are right or you are wrong.

There are still many women who are abused by men and in former generations wives never complained, now they can't bear it no more and the reaction to what has been endured, sometimes may frighten the men of today.

If we learned to respect each other!!

You put a lot of reasoning into this one no doubt.

Love,
Margherita

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England
4 posted 2007-12-06 06:26 PM


hi i think that i migh have hit a nerve of a very sensitive i do not want to upset people
all so this was aimed at allot of the girls in peterborough uk because they go out and randomly start on blokes in the street now i know some women are still hit by there husbands and they should be shot i do not condone any violence what so ever. it is not ok to hit women but does that mean women should be able to hit thjose with morals and they might come across those who donthave morals and they might get hurt. i am so dearly sorry if you are affended

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2007-12-08 04:06 PM


Hi Kudanesh,
   I did not mean to be short with you. I am sorry. I just realized that you are dislexic. My husband was dislexic so I understand the problem. Actually, I agree with your poem to a certain extent. I think that there are women (and men)out there who don't behave very well these days.
                                    Ida


Margherita
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6 posted 2007-12-08 05:50 PM


I am not offended, dear kudanesh, you have touched upon a very serious theme and I understand your point of view. We  - women and men - really must move towards harmony and true understanding of each other, to avoid such awful behaviour.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2007-12-08 05:54 PM


Margherita said it all



and yes, this is a very serious concept

ARCTIC WIND

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8 posted 2007-12-08 06:20 PM


ha yea i like how you concluded this.  This is true all around woman think they can hit and its ok sometimes just cuz society think its not a problem.  Real fresh
Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
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Earth
9 posted 2007-12-08 06:32 PM


"We  - women and men - really must move towards harmony and true understanding of each other, to avoid such awful behaviour."

very much agreed

you have many spelling errors that need to be fixed, but other than that it was a good poem.

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