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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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shooting holes in an afternoon sky with my laser guided banana watching the seagulls fly when the statue of me moves into some cowboy tai chi from pool stick horseys chasing the velvet indigo of another man's percussion but you are there again with your chin on modeling for shoulders and whisper places with bird seed on your bosom and a working woman's hands and just the right amount of not enough time to make me want your addiction |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well written, my friend... j |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there never is enough time, is there?  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I love the descriptives here! Excellent! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
some addictions are lovely.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am surrounded by images of graceful statuary, allowing the birds to feed from the hands of granite. Well, that's what I see, m'friend.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend jwesley, thanks to you for the read _____________ ms suesea, thanks babe for reading and knowing the answer _____________ ms nan, thank you for your moments here on my humble words _____________ ms gs, thanks babe for the touch and tickle _________ ms sun, thank you for shopping dark mart..lol |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I'm thinking you are a delightful addiction Mr Daark....  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b..and I only wish you were addicted..thanks ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
with bird seed on your bosom and a working woman's hands and just the right amount of not enough time to make me want your addiction It's good that I have enough time to read you, for you are always a treat! Addiction is a dangerous thing, isn't it? ... especially in love matters! But do I know what it means ... Great lines! Love, Margherita |
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Yvette Junior Member
since 2007-12-08
Posts 19Texas, United States |
cowboy tai chi laser guided bananas I like the way you write. Silly but not trite. Nice. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nicely written DARK ARCTIC WIND |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
another poem that plays with words. I like it and like the other have said the way you describe things is very interesting because it bring a new light to the poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, I lost you in the first try,,,duh..thanks babe for the read and touch _______________________________ ms Yvette, thanks and welcome to piptown...I appreciate your eyes here _____________ Thank you Artic one for the review and reply _____________ DI, humble thanks for the touch here |
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