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Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
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Earth

0 posted 2007-12-03 09:02 PM


I just recently got my heart broken, and the only way for me to escape is to.

As I lay in the snow
I gaze into the stars
The silent night
Clears my mind
I drift to a place
I wish i could never leave

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

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Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-03 09:34 PM


Dream into a wonderland of your own! never leave, never let anyone join, this is your space, your space only!

Never trust anyone to go into your wonderland, of candy, cookies, everyday, is chocolate cake day!

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-12-03 09:47 PM


I know this is hard, being so close to Christmas, but make an angel while in the snow, and make a wish on the stars, your soul love will come when you least expect it...

hugs~ARH

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2007-12-03 09:56 PM


Love this!
sorry about your heart-break tho...

g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 62
Earth
4 posted 2007-12-03 11:43 PM


I'm sorry to..

thanks all for your comments  
i realy do apreciate it.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-12-04 03:48 AM


Lincoln,

I wish for you that you always carry those stars with you.  I hope for you that you can always take them out to see them when you need them - no matter what time of day.

Alison

Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
Posts 143
Canada
6 posted 2007-12-04 10:28 AM


Nice poem.
Enjoyed the picture it drew.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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