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Lincoln
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0 posted 2007-12-03 04:20 PM


This is a poem about my first love.

Imagine a girl so perfect, and amazing
Her smile so kind, and inviting
It isn't hard

Her heart is courteous
Never selfish always generous
She's the sun in my sky
And now you can see why


She's always on my mind
Walking hand in hand
I feel like the luckiest man

Imagine a girl so perfect
It isn't hard
All i had to do
Was imagine you


© Copyright 2007 Lincoln Deyette - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-12-03 04:23 PM


Enjoyed...James
Lincoln
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2 posted 2007-12-03 05:16 PM


Thanks
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-12-03 05:36 PM


When such lovely romantic imagination manifests, we are truly lucky!

This is lovely.
Welcome to Pip!

Love,
margherita

vandana
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4 posted 2007-12-03 05:56 PM


welcome to passion enjoyed
Sunshine
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5 posted 2007-12-04 10:49 AM


Welcome to Passions, Lincoln.
Please, check your email for a
very special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2007-12-04 11:04 AM


Lincoln~
Welcome to the fabulous halls of PiP~

Your girl is lucky to have someone who
writes his love and admiration so poetically~

Enjoy your stay among us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

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