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Open Poetry #41
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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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0 posted 2007-12-02 04:57 PM

Tonight,
We gaze at the stars, hug, kiss and miss
All the times we used to go to dances and proms together,
Take long walks... no matter the weather.

Separate. Never.
Struggles. Endeavor.
Love. Forever.
© Copyright 2007 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-02 05:04 PM

Lovely

ARCTIC WIND
diab soule
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since 2007-12-01
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ohio
2 posted 2007-12-02 05:23 PM

Heart-felt write.. Nicely done
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-12-04 12:53 PM

Enjoyed...James
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2007-12-04 04:41 PM

I like the way you use language in this one.  Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
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