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diab soule
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0 posted 2007-12-02 02:37 PM



-Weeping garden-

Entering the pale garden,
thistles strive for excellence;
fathoming in wicked schemes,
bored to fated negligence--

Forbidden fruit pouring pity,
for it is mute, non existent;
a weeping tear liquids the sky,
though emotionally distant--

------Laying beneath the rain,
where gentle wind once blew;
lied there, the frown of thorns,
---------A secret rendezvous.

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dgvarner
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1 posted 2007-12-02 02:47 PM


Oh this is very cool!

enjoyed...
g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-02 02:57 PM


Welcome!!!!!


This is a lovely poem

ARCTIC WIND

diab soule
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3 posted 2007-12-02 04:35 PM


Thanks for the Welcome
Gumpy
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4 posted 2007-12-03 11:55 AM


Nice read.  Enjoyed it.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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