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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2007-12-02 01:30 AM



were does your mind wonder
what do you choose to see
or do you let other people tell you who to be
so the next time some one is ribbing you or edeing you to quit
its not how it makes me feel its how do you feel about it
and if they'er ganging up on you how ever bad it seems
dont ever let these people in you head especially you dreams
when you find words carnt hurt you your more powerful than you look
now the nasty buggers carnt see inside your book
have you ever head the saying the pens mighter than the sword
if you give them no ink to right with then they'll soon get board
but words are very power full and from these you must deffend
other wise in the long run they'll drive you round the bend
so if you master this tecnquice then they wont know were to start
bumps and bruses go away but word linger in a good heart

© Copyright 2007 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-02 12:21 PM


bumps and bruises go away but words linger in a good heart

Your thoughts are beautiful and wise, dear Andrew. It is indeed important to be able to find the answers within our own hearts and minds, thus not being exposed to negative influences.

Love,
Margherita

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England
2 posted 2007-12-02 02:05 PM


i thiank you for you kind and thought full words i found this one hard to put to gether
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