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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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Peterborough,England

0 posted 2007-12-02 12:31 PM



Of what and where im dreaming,
It always haunts me so,
As a long loved part of me,
Has gone but left her glow,
Her flow of grace and elegance,
That once was loud and clear,
Was quickly taken away from me,
And now she's not so near,
What ever god looks over us,
Has taken her away,
My days were full of sunshine,
And then they turned to gray,
What pain thats left behind,
All of us will know,
The feelings we have to deal with,
When letting someone go,
They will always be in your heart,
And also in your dreams,
The future isn't always gray,
Or as dismal as it seems,
When I think of all she's done for me,
Throughout these twenty years,
Even though she's not here now,
She wipes away my tears,
I know she's up there watching me,
Sometimes it not so clear,
But when Im worried or afraid,
She takes away my fear,
You've left your glow behind you,
And now I realize why,
Its so that I am not alone,
So thanks Sophie, good bye.


This was dedicatied to my friend Sophie
(4th march 1987-22 feb 2007) sadly she
could not stand the pressures of life,
but because of her I am a better person.

© Copyright 2007 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
smellmyfinger
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since 2007-12-02
Posts 21
Wyoming,Natrona
1 posted 2007-12-02 12:37 PM


very sad =( but very good
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-12-02 02:05 PM


Very poignant write, dear Andrew! A beautiful heartfelt tribute to your friend Sophie.

I am sure she continues to love you from Above.

Love,
Margherita


kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
3 posted 2007-12-02 02:08 PM


thanks again Margherita you are yet again a plesure to hear from she is there god will look after her for me
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2007-12-02 02:52 PM


A very sweet way to say good-bye to your friend.  nicely penned.

g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
Posts 143
Canada
5 posted 2007-12-03 12:07 PM


Sad, but a very nice write.
Beautiful.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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