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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2007-11-30 08:31 AM


A boisterous blue jay calls his own name
from atop a scraggy pine,
while a lone woodpecker hammers endlessly
on a once-magnificent tree,
his powerful chisel-beak cushioned
by a spongy protective head bone,
much as the moss green pathway
undulating before me
muffles the sound
of my trespassing feet.
Each remains oblivious to my presence.
A raucous raven hops nearby menacingly,
seeking an opportune moment to steal
from my backpack left leaning
against a decaying oak log.
A chattering squirrel cries foul play,
but the trickster pays no heed.
In an instant, he descends upon the open pack,
seizes a bright red foil wrapped granola bar,
then quickly exits with his ill-gotten booty.
I am at once both amused and annoyed
(Poe-etic justice?)
and vow to better guard my survival snacks
on my next wild side walk.


© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-11-30 08:52 AM


What fun

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-11-30 12:08 PM


Well, you made his day! You beautifully display here the harmony of nature.

Enjoyed this wild side walk greatly.

Love,
margherita

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3 posted 2007-11-30 04:51 PM


Very amusing, enjoyed. I had a similar experience once. I had hidden Easter eggs in the back yard for the kids. They were plastic and some were half clear plastic.
I watched a crow fly down, peck open the egg and fly away with a little gold colored necklace. Crows are so smart.
                                    Ida

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4 posted 2007-12-01 05:03 PM


great story!

applause!!

vlraynes
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5 posted 2007-12-18 02:55 AM


This reminds me of my walks when
I used to live at the Grand Canyon...

Thanks for taking me back there, Kacy...


"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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6 posted 2007-12-18 03:08 AM


"I am at once both amused and annoyed
(Poe-etic justice?)
and vow to better guard my survival snacks
on my next wild side walk."

Perfect summation, Kacy!  You make me want to put on a pack myself with those descriptons that took me hiking with you!   .....jo


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7 posted 2007-12-18 06:58 AM


Grab your backpacks and let's hit the wild pathways then, Jo and Vicky!
(Don't forget the thermos of Kahlua coffee)

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8 posted 2007-12-18 09:42 AM


I love this:  (Poe-etic justice?) heh heh

I love listening to them call to each other in the woods...
"Kacy has treats...Kacy has treats"



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9 posted 2007-12-18 11:38 AM


good read
TomMark
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10 posted 2007-12-18 12:04 PM


lovely and cheerful tuned.
always good.
Tomtoo

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