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Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
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0 posted 2007-11-29 06:59 AM



So wrapped up
can't think straight
pulled to what was
falling to what is
having to move forward
but blinded to whats there
knowing without acknowledging
holding on
slipping faster
knowing it won't end
happily ever after


Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
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1 posted 2007-11-29 01:50 PM


Gumpy my friend, there will be a happy ending, for you will make it happen. Live life for yourself and seek all you want, getting caught up with grief benefits no-one at all. You must move on, donate time to a cause or grow to love your writing and put all your feelings down, I find that often it helps a lot. Create a book, don't be scared to honest in it, you will find then you are happy to hand the books around, people will see and feel you struggle and you shall move on from this.

Have a wonderful week my friend, there are many who share the same feelings, and you know what, most start a new life and again are happy.

Sincerely
Rick

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
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2 posted 2007-11-29 02:24 PM


beautiful grumpy mood.

enjoyed

Tom

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2007-11-29 03:37 PM


Rick is a wise man.
             Ida

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2007-11-29 06:23 PM


quote:
having to move forward
but blinded to what's there




Exactly, it happens all the time, you have described it perfectly.

But you know you CAN move forward, without being blocked by the past. Every step forwards brings more light.

Love,
Margherita

Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
Posts 143
Canada
5 posted 2007-12-03 11:46 AM


Thank you all very much for reading and for your replies.

Yes, he does seem to be Marchmadness.

Thanks again. Much appreciated.

Gumpy


How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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