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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-11-28 09:37 AM





Walking on eggshells which break without warning.
Throw out the dark night, I'm a child of the morning.
Sunlight that dapples, grass laden with dew.
Crows yell for breakfast in golden red hue.
Waves on the lake reflect violet sky.
A chill to the air because winter is nigh.
Yes give me the morning, throw out the dark night
Kingfisher, chickadee, heron in flight

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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-11-28 04:12 PM


A very beautiful morning song, dear Tina!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-11-28 05:27 PM


Very beautiful indeed

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2007-11-28 05:30 PM


You make me actually enjoy morning.
                           Ida

Gumpy
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4 posted 2007-11-28 07:57 PM


I agree... beautiful.

You set me on a dock overlooking a still lake.
Thanx

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

TinaTrivett
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5 posted 2007-11-29 08:49 PM


Thanks all..
aziza
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6 posted 2007-12-01 12:35 PM


What a beautiful poem.
  
I have enjoyed your poetry and really admire your writing.  

I want to step into the picture and into your words.

A

TinaTrivett
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7 posted 2007-12-01 10:13 AM


Thanks Alison. So very nice to see you.
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