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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
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0 posted 2007-11-27 01:03 PM


I'm falling, looking behind,
Passing my life by,
All I've created
Is now falling apart,
Back to the start.
A thousand questions
Are haunting my mind
At long sleepless nights,
Don't know the answers,
Flying on black wings, almost broken
I can't hold on more...
A fallen angel...

Make, make my wings white,
Just make me blind with your love again.
Spread, just spread my wings
For I'm too weak
And make me fly again.
Again...

My soul is sleeping inside,
Numb, deaf and blind
Or just pretending?
Just to believe,
Just to become...
And when I wake up,
See the rain outside
And nothing more...
Nothing...

My angel of love,
Make my wings white,
Just make me blind with your love again.
Spread, just spread my wings
For I'm too weak
And make me fly again.
Again...

My temple is ruins,
My fears break my wings,
Just one, broken, dream,
Can't hold on more...

© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
Posts 143
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1 posted 2007-11-27 08:13 PM


I like this poem.
"My soul is sleeping inside,
Numb, deaf and blind
Or just pretending?"

Sad,  but I can relate.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
Posts 409

2 posted 2007-11-30 04:07 AM


Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
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