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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-11-26 06:32 AM



yea though I walk sometimes
through your valley lady tree
I fear I know of our evil
more than you would care to

lest you became a willow
with the bending of wanting
and ambering up of your eyes
until there were tears again

and you had fragile in your voice
that kept you awake some nights
waiting for the morning tides
to sooth you with another day

and the distant sound of my soul
pretending to be just a wind
wanting your limbs as they dance
over a stranger's praying fingers

on the hem of mosey town outskirts


__________

daark


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Kahlil
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1 posted 2007-11-26 08:04 AM


did you write this one in church yesterday?
while you observed the one in the next pew...
the one with that look in her eyes?

"on the hem of mosey town outskirts"
I love reading you...

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-11-26 08:23 AM


When the stranger writes love/ly words, it sure is purdy....     Loved this one D.
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3 posted 2007-11-26 09:24 AM


"and ambering up of your eyes
until there were tears again

and you had fragile in your voice
that kept you awake some nights
waiting for the morning tides
to sooth you with another day

and the distant sound of my soul
pretending to be just a wind"

good grief mister!!
this is so sweetly tender...touched ever so softly

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-11-26 05:17 PM


oh my Mr Daark... you sure do have a way with words... enjoyed   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-11-26 11:29 PM


ms kahlil, thanks so much lady friend

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ms gs, thanks babe for the eyes here

____________

ms suesea, thank you for feeling under the edges of this one babe

_____________

ms R & B thanks to you for your eye play here

Margherita
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6 posted 2007-11-28 05:02 PM


quote:
yea though I walk sometimes
through your valley lady tree
I fear I know of our evil
more than you would care to

lest you became a willow
with the bending of wanting
and ambering up of your eyes
until there were tears again

and you had fragile in your voice
that kept you awake some nights
waiting for the morning tides
to sooth you with another day

and the distant sound of my soul
pretending to be just a wind
wanting your limbs as they dance
over a stranger's praying fingers

on the hem of mosey town outskirts




sigh ... and you had fragile in your voice

and now the voice is gone ...

Take a bow.
Love,
Margherita  

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
7 posted 2007-11-29 06:29 AM


ms mar, thank you babe
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