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Rick
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0 posted 2007-11-24 08:28 PM



Early memories
Triggered by aromas scent
Amazing the how


Discover today
Yesterday has passed away
Tomorrow will be


Time takes a lifetime
Memories the just reward
A pity they fade


Together as one
As many we have gathered
To share the burden


When is the ending?
Where is the rainbow today
I need colour and fancy


Where are my true friends?
Today in need of answers
Hoping they will know

© Copyright 2007 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-11-24 10:03 PM


Rick.... delightful all of them unique and beautiful!  thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2007-11-24 11:06 PM


Each haiku touches the othe in kindredship!  Beautifully done.  The last one really struck me....it seems that some friends are for a lifetime, and others for only the gifts they bring to our lives for a little while...     But I think we always know them, no matter how long it's been.  ~ KL
Rick
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3 posted 2007-11-24 11:23 PM


RDB, great to see you here, thank you so much for the visit my friend and your comments.

KL, lovely to see your comments here my friend, thank you so much for taking the time to reply, I very much enjoyed.

Rick

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-11-25 04:13 AM


"Discover today."...James
Rick
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5 posted 2007-11-25 05:30 AM


Thanks for your reply James, appreciated.

Rick

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6 posted 2007-11-25 12:29 PM


good read
Rick
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7 posted 2007-11-25 01:15 PM


vandana, nice to have you visit my friend, thank you for your comment, appreciated.

Rick

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8 posted 2007-11-25 08:16 PM



Good one Rick

Lindsay

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9 posted 2007-11-26 08:47 AM


Rick~
Dear man ..... you word-gift us so elegantly~

Though I like them all, my heart picked this one to love ...

'Time takes a lifetime
Memories the just reward
A pity they fade'


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2007-11-26 11:12 AM


the 2nd one is my favorite...just in case you were wondering.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Rick
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11 posted 2007-11-26 01:30 PM


Hi Lindsay, great to see you here again my firend, thank you for your comment, as always very much appreciated.

Dear Marge, great to have you visit my friend, thank you so much for you lovely comment, heart felt and enjoyed.

Dear Susan, I was wondering, that is the problem when you put a few of these things together, the knowing what people can relate to and enjoy, thank you for taking the time to comment my friend.

To you all my friends, again thank you so much for the visit and replies, I enjoy each and every one of them, have a wonderful week and all take care.

Sincerely
Rick

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