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Before The Night Was Over
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Before The Night Was Over |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Before The Night Was Over As I thought these thoughts to myself, "My goodness what a gorgeous woman," she thought to herself... Well, how could I know her thoughts until she revealed them to me? And she did before the night was over, and her thoughts and actions were very close to mine. JamesLee 24November 2007 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know, when a woman feels her own beauty in the eyes of a man...it's truly magical. Brought a smile to my memory James. Nice write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this one made me smile James!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
always a romantic poem!jamesMichael Lovely, i really enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
James - I really like this - It's roomy plenty of space to dream - multiple scenarios could be imagined - but the really nice thing is how these pieces can and do fit in to many different puzzles. Both topic and content have a shadowy mystique - nice touch. Leaves the reader with lot of food thought. dale |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you This Diamond, Roniece, Artic Wind and Lucky for the wonderful responses... Lucky I was hoping it would have that effect...James |
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