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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-23 03:36 AM


For My Love

The night I met her it took
me about five seconds
to fall in love with her.
Perhaps some will not
believe in this story,
so for those unbelievers
I will tell them that I'm
still falling in love,
layer by layer, five years later.
My love never went away
and my love continues to
grow a little more every day,
for my love, for my love,
for my love...

JamesLee
23November
2007






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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-11-23 08:18 AM


..."I'm
still falling in love,
layer by layer, five years later."

~ True love is like a 1000-petaled lotus blossom.


Linda

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-11-23 02:14 PM


Thank you Earth Angel for the wonderful response...yes love takes time to grow, just as a flower takes time to blossom, and it is that first glance that leads to another and another...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-11-24 09:48 PM


James... your words are truly lovely here... your heart is full of love I see .. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-11-26 03:18 AM


Thank you Roniece for the wonderful response...James
lyricpoet
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5 posted 2007-11-27 09:23 AM


Truly a wonderful write, lovely penmanship!! Much enjoyed.
Margherita
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6 posted 2007-11-27 12:13 PM


quote:
I will tell them that I'm
still falling in love,
layer by layer, five years later.



Such a beautiful statement, dear James!! This is indeed the most desirable way of falling in love ... unraveling each other step by step forever.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-11-29 02:56 PM


Thank you lyricpoet and Margherita for the nice responses...James
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