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xopoetxo
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since 2007-06-15
Posts 14


0 posted 2007-11-21 08:19 PM


I remember the sweet lull of his voice.
The one that conforted me,
the one that put me to sleep at night.
The one that kept me going each day,
and the one that believed in me,
when no one else did.
The one that fixed me,
when I was broken.
And the one that found me,
when I was lost.
This is a fading voice now,
the one that has not been heard,
for so many years.
I remember the joyful life he once had.
The one taken away in such an unfair way.
The life lived by my brother.

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Bronzeage
Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197

1 posted 2007-11-21 11:11 PM


Another touching piece. I feel the emotion. You have expressed it very well.

Type II poet. Its worth the work.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-11-22 02:27 PM


Fine writing of memories...James
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-22 06:26 PM


Nice memories LOL

ARCTIC WIND

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