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lucky
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0 posted 2007-11-21 06:38 PM




there is...

here and there is now no rippling
tides or rumors how what ever comes
will come at best we know the feces
lie in rest - we can’t go back or
make it right - do what
gets you through
the night

what
happens on

a morrow day matters not if
your away - saw the dregs you
had to weigh not a clue of
words relay

so

hapless

for

dear
soul as I
for knew you as

surely I

it wasn't me..! it wasn't you..!

but I was truely
hurt because it was
likely I'd never
see

and

I knew that
you knew that I knew that

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2007 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-11-21 07:23 PM


Interesting write and rhyming scheme.
Write on

Martie
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2 posted 2007-11-21 08:45 PM


Dale

"because it was
likely I'd never
see

and

I knew that
you knew that I knew that"

I understand this...it hurts some.  


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2007-11-22 08:41 AM


Lucky~
Thanksgiving blessings to you and Rosemary~

This 'touches'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
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4 posted 2007-11-22 11:47 AM


Hi Lucky -- Great take and much appreciated. I wish I had your insight to add to facility.

Very best, Jim

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-11-22 06:25 PM


it is nice of you to dedicate poems to friends

ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2007-11-23 09:55 PM


I knew that
you knew that I knew that

wow loved this Lucky
Krysti

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-11-24 02:48 AM


yes, I knew too!   I enjoyed this read Lucky!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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