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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-21 06:14 AM



This Isn't Love


You're acting
like you don't
care for me;

and it hurts...

and if it hurts
this isn't love.


JamesLee
21November
2007


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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-21 07:15 AM


YOU TELL HER

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-11-21 08:30 AM


Unfortunately, some people DO hurt the ones they love. Perhaps they feel safe with them and that they are loved unconditionally, despite any funk they may be in.


Linda

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2007-11-21 09:07 AM


:/  

It always hurts when it feels like someone doesn't love you like they claim.  

Move on.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-11-21 01:28 PM


Thank you Artic Wind, Earth Angel and Susan for the nice responses...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-11-24 10:08 PM


yes James... it can hurt ..but you grow stronger from the hurt... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-11-25 03:55 AM


thank you Roniece for the nice response...
it is an opportunity to grow stronger, if the challenge is met...James

Gumpy
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7 posted 2007-11-26 08:57 AM


does anything hurt more?
If it does I haven't the displeasure of experiencing it!

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-11-26 01:49 PM


When someone you truly care for passes away it definately gets the attention of your emotions...James
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