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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-11-20 10:10 PM


    
     Timeless Autumn Love

Somewhere, mid these sweeping
  starfields
of the vast-eternal cosmic sea,
around an infinitesimal bend
in the ever grand and dazzling
  Milky Way,
sails this tiny ‘lifeship’ Gaia
  water-world.
Here...
(where humble raindrops
become rivers moving mountains)
may her spirit choose to walk  
in relentless beauty,
through incorruptible Time,
moving me as well by Love
...for such an eternity,
to remember her...simply...
as the colors of all the
  Autumn days...
that ever were!


© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-11-20 10:15 PM


ahhha you gotta know I love this one!! Sooooooo beautiful!
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2 posted 2007-11-20 10:53 PM


Very nice piece. I enjoyed this very much.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-11-20 11:04 PM


"sails this tiny ‘lifeship’ Gaia
  water-world.
Here...
(where humble raindrops
become rivers moving mountains)"

~ Love the poetic skin you're in! Poetry seeps out of your every pore and into your pen!


Linda

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4 posted 2007-11-21 01:10 AM


Romantic to the core....simply wonderful!

Naome

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5 posted 2007-11-21 01:13 AM


!!!!!
Absolute Romantic. wait for #2 and #3 and more

Beautiful, and emotional truly

Tomtoo  

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6 posted 2007-11-21 04:59 PM


Thank you, dear poet, for such a gorgeous write!!!! Gaia smiles.....
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7 posted 2007-11-21 08:50 PM


Bruce......Ok, this one made me tear-up.  So well captured, the feeling with the words.  Thank you.
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8 posted 2007-11-22 03:43 PM


Perfect
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