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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-11-20 08:15 AM



Hopefully You Smiled

Writing a few words
Where do I go from here
With a few lines written
As always being sincere

Words from my heart
Writing shows how I feel
Would you understand
The true feelings I reveal

I find the poet in me
My heart and soul I bare
As I opened up to you
In the hope you still care

My dreams I expose
Along with wishes I write
Taking hold of my pen
It gives you more insight

Hopefully you smiled
You're still the one I miss
So a loving note to you
I have sealed with a kiss


HopeĀ©2007
Poem below with music and graphic , although I did change a verse after posting it at Starlite
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91012974.html

© Copyright 2007 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
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woven by a poet's loom
1 posted 2007-11-20 01:48 PM



            Written as a poem
            and one we share with the world
            The public letter


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-11-20 02:15 PM


One thing that always comes through in your poetry, is your sweet sincerity ~ and that makes anyone who reads it, smile!


Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-11-23 03:18 AM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-23 03:58 PM


lovely hopeS

ARCTIC WIND

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa
5 posted 2007-11-27 09:15 PM


words on paper speak of honesty from the heart. beautifully written piece.
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2007-11-27 09:28 PM



Another great write Hope

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Patricia
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Missouri
7 posted 2007-12-03 07:37 PM


So lovely to read your work again.

Patricia

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