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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-11-18 07:13 PM


  


I am pouring my heart and soul,
like buckets of love spilling,
overflowing into your heart.

My love stands wide open,
with arms stretched across,
the vast universe and heavens,

So deep, so loving, gentle,
deeper than any imagination,
deeper than time itself.

I offer you all I have,
so freely I give to you,
for your love in return,

return, like circles,
ripples in a pond,
throw the pebble....




You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-18 08:07 PM


Very romantic

ARH

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-11-18 08:16 PM


Thank you Artic Wind!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-18 09:01 PM


A pleasure to read...James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-11-18 09:36 PM


Thank you James....

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2007-11-19 02:17 PM


"love stands wide open,
with arms stretched across,
the vast universe and heavens...

...gentle,
deeper than any imagination,
deeper than time itself(!)...

now THAT is 'Romanticism!' and, I believe (even if not intentional on the part of the author?!)...
also a fine expression of 'Universalism' [the science and philosophy which focuses on the vast,
deeply interconnected, scintillating cosmos of 'infinite potentialities' beyond our often petty,
localistic, Earth-bound (myopic) focus on (negative) human 'differences' (in race, religion, nationality; etc.)
that has been the scourge of human history and source of intolerance, bigotry, prejudice, genocide,
war; etc. for millenia']

Applause for this 'penning!'

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2007-11-19 11:17 PM


'Universalism'~is correct and was intended..

WOW thank you mr. Poet...one for replying, and two for seeing my heart as it is written!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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