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Timescape Moment
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Timescape Moment |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Timescape Moment Somber November sunbeams scatter remnants of the night, spinning morning webs of light and memories… mid this deep-wooded glen’s lucent serenity, where a milky-white stream sings over tumble-sculpted water stones, vanishing in the mists of distance and time… like our finest hopes and plans, leaving only remnants of love and all that ‘might have been,’ along an infinitely irreversible continuum of relentless flux and ever-restless chaos, near the razor-edge of our dreams. Bruce E. Adams Jr. (11/16/07) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
O-kay I got ta reply on this one love the climax dale |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beauitiful. Beauty of life is well seasoned by some unforgetable dreams. love this one. Tomtoo Have a wonderful weekend, Sir Bruce.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"where a milky-white stream sings over tumble-sculpted water stones, vanishing in the mists of distance and time…" as seen through the eyes of an artist   |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This write was greatly enjoyed by artists here who commented on its perfect pitch with the earth's season and one's emotional season. Beautifully captured images. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
November greetings, Bruce. You have captured the mood, essence, and imagery of this marvelously mysterious month, perfectly! ~ and very poetically! "Somber November sunbeams scatter remnants of the night, spinning morning webs of light and memories…" ~ Gosh, yer goood!  Warm hug and a smile, Linda |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed this read, the words are what came natural and you didnt alter a thing, i like it.. thank you.. Goldenrose |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Bleeding Ink Junior Member
since 2007-11-12
Posts 31 |
leaving only remnants of love and all that ‘might have been,’ along an infinitely irreversible.... my favorite line, enjoyed it very much! touches me... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely, Bruce. I really like the "razor-edge of our dreams" - the ending was perfection on top of wonderful. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: the complexity of existence is best perceived through the complexity of dreams ... to see the order beyond the apparent chaos is quite a task, isn't it? Very beautiful, Bruce. Love, Margherita |
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