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Just a Little Air
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Just a Little Air |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Just a Little Air I don't know how to say this but i'll try as best i can what once was 'till forever is now not ever again our sunday morning brekkie will be every other week beacause although we both had learned it we never turned the other cheek fights are replaced with sorry's and i never meant to hurt's caught up in all the littles never stopped to do the work although these hurts may stop they may even go away they been replaced with new ones with not seeing you each day and tho my heart's been sundered and i'm far beyond despair the thought of little smiles gives me just a little air Gumpy Heartbroken [This message has been edited by Gumpy (11-15-2007 05:33 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed this sad poem Gumpy ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
the thought of little smiles gives me just a little air such tenderness! Sometimes a smile can do wonders, you are right. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sadly, these things happen... and over time, Sir, I've noted that what was the "worst" of times slip into some silent cavern of dark... and although it takes several years, some good of the memories will be all that lives on... that is, they will, if you're anything like me...  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It's too bad when reality doesn't blend with all the lessons we learned as children. You write with heart! miscellanea |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
I don't know how to say this but i'll try as best i can what once was 'till forever is now not ever again I loved the way you started it!!! Great going... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Nice write, thought sad. Add an arm around the shouler with that smile. Tenderness should work."late" |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you all very much. I hope so sunshine. Gumpy |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
miscellanea... The same thought crossed my mind recently. It sure isn't how I pictured it turning out. Thank you Heartbroken |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and tho my heart's been sundered and i'm far beyond despair the thought of little smiles gives me just a little air yes, it's the little smiles that can give one hope.. enjoyed the read, thank you .. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you Roniece. It's the smiles of my three girls that have gotten me this far. Thanks How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write Gumpy Much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you Lindsay I appreciate it. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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