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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-11-15 02:50 PM


Writing Love

"Love is the outward
expression of a giving heart."

Some write of love like
its something complex,
and within a relationship
it can seem to be that way,
especially if you want to
love someone and the object
of your affection goes away.
Still the basic concepts of
love remain true, its hard
to love another until love
lives inside of you.

JamesLee
15November
2007





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Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
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1 posted 2007-11-15 02:56 PM


"its hard
to love another until love
lives inside of you."

Great observation James. And sooooo true.

Heartbroken

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-11-15 03:34 PM


I always enjoy your love poems

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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3 posted 2007-11-15 05:00 PM


Your thoughts are wise, dear James. When we are able to BE love, then we can love unconditionally, it's a very important step of our "heart evolution" (not so easy, no)

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2007-11-17 06:03 PM


Perfect!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-11-17 11:53 PM


well said James.. I like the last lines..
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-11-18 06:34 AM


Thank you Gumpy, Artic Wind, Margherita, This Diamond and Roniece for the wonderful responses...James
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