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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-11-13 06:05 PM



    

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Exploring you


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Rooted in the flowerbed
of your soul
I set out to explore
the landscape of your mind
swimming upstream
in your veins
towards the center
of your heart.

Inside mirrors in place,
ears pressed to your chest
I perceive the gushing
of your blood
and I synchronize my pace
with yours
drowning in the dizziness
of desire.

Breath of Universe
takes over
and as pioneers
sailing through space
we discover each other
and everything else
related to the wonder
of creation.

Seduced by the beauty
of your spirit
I touch upon
life’s sweetness,
in between storms
eased by rituals
inherited from winged
messengers of love.

In these blessed moments
of deep attunement
to each other
and to All there is
we know who we are.
We are the offspring
of Love divine,
like stars we shine.

You see …
rooted in the flowerbed
of your soul,
I found my true Home.
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© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-11-13 06:28 PM


Nice...nice...nice...James
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-11-13 06:34 PM


Margherita, you are one scintillating cosmic love explorer! My, oh, my! I adore these writes from the very soul core of you!

"Breath of Universe
takes over
and as pioneers
sailing through space
we discover each other
and everything else
related to the wonder
of creation."

~ Oh, yes!

With love and respect for both you and your writing!

Linda


Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-11-13 06:41 PM


Seduced by the beauty
of your spirit
I touch upon
life’s sweetness,
in between storms
eased by rituals
inherited from winged
messengers of love.

Oh dear Margherita-

this is lovely, Lovely, lovely

Really love it

ARCTIC WIND


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-11-13 08:08 PM


Margherita~
You sweet little romantic you~

Love it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Margherita
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5 posted 2007-11-15 03:54 PM


Thank you my dear Poet friends James, Linda, Arctic Wind and Marge, for your kind comments. Happy that you enjoyed my words.

Have a wonderful day.
Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2007-11-17 09:37 AM


Passionate travels your words, a caress of the purity of soul mate.
Gorgeous.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

7 posted 2007-11-17 09:57 AM


Margherita, this is quite a lovely
work of art expressed from the spirit
of you.  I felt you!

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
8 posted 2007-11-17 08:00 PM



Very romantic Margherita

Well written.

Lindsay

Gumpy
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since 2007-11-06
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9 posted 2007-11-17 08:26 PM


"Seduced by the beauty
of your spirit
I touch upon
life’s sweetness."

You write Beautifully.
I enjoyed tjis vey much.

Gumpy

Heartbroken

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2007-11-28 12:38 PM


Dear TD, Kahlil, Lindsay and Gumpy, thank you very much for your kind comments.
Love,
Margherita

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