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PrestonThePoet
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0 posted 2007-11-12 11:12 PM


Glacial Spires dart through the sky and puncture the ground.
Spring water rushes through every crack; every crevice.
Leaving no dry ground to tread on;
Leaving it clear, luminous and treacherous,
But, you still try to cross.
Even though you know you won’t get there, or back.
You throw yourself at the task ahead.
I guess I’m the anchor rope.
Holding your life by woven hope;
I won’t snap don’t worry.
Your love will keep me forever strong.

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aziza
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1 posted 2007-11-12 11:19 PM


I read and I enjoyed a lot.  Beautiful images that you are writing in these words.  Thank you.

A

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-11-13 07:31 AM


Hi, Preston! Some striking images there!!!

The following lines are especially meaningful to me:

"I guess I’m the anchor rope.
Holding your life by woven hope;"

~ Creatively expressed!


Linda

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