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aziza
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0 posted 2007-11-12 06:45 PM


Conductor of Need


    
     Lingering notes of music entice
     and stroke my body –
     as you conduct with artistic ease.

There is only “I” in this composition you write.
A masterpiece, you create, among the low notes,
each measure coaxed with exquisite detail.

My arms long to direct the melody,
but you gently push them aside –
playing me as your instrument.

        You lead the symphony.

And I soar among chorale’s high soprano,
Splintering as strains of vibrant music,
reach higher and even higher,
then shatter in dramatic crescendo,


raining notes of ecstasy upon us.


Alison



© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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1 posted 2007-11-12 06:46 PM


Very beautiful Write!

ARCTIC WIND

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-11-12 07:13 PM


another fine 'write!'...[perfect title too!]...

applause!

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-11-12 07:31 PM


Alison, is he for hire? I would like a conductor like that to play a symphony on me and let me reach a high note or two! lol

Loved it!!!


Linda


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4 posted 2007-11-12 10:08 PM


ms az, I can see you here, wearing notes, and a smile..and a thousand glistening eyes.  This was a lovely dance ms.
aziza
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5 posted 2007-11-12 11:25 PM


Arctic Wind,

Thank you for stopping in to read and comment.

Alison

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secondhanddreampoet,

You are the best!  Thanks, friend.

A

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Awww, Linda - I dunno, darlin'.  You WERE pretty stingy with those Holler Men.  I'll think about it and get back to you in a century or two (after I wear 'em out).

Love you, dahlink.

Alison

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DS

Thank you - do you know those notes heat right up in cold climates!

A

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6 posted 2007-11-13 07:34 AM


Yummm...James
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-11-13 07:40 AM


Oh, shucks! Hey, what if I threw in a couple more of those Hog Yeller rednecks fer yer lovin' pleasure? ~ and fer free?!? ~ then would you reconsider?!? Time's awastin'! I ain't gettin' any younger!!! ~ Two hundred years is a mighty looooong time!


Lindy Loulabelle

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8 posted 2007-11-13 09:04 AM


dang woman..this is beautiful....makes me think of certain songs I like to hear over and over
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9 posted 2007-11-13 09:41 AM


A~ this is beyond lovely...
aziza
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10 posted 2007-11-14 12:41 PM


Hey, James - Thanks for stopping by.

A

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Okay, Lindy Loulabelle, you are so darned cute that you can take your pick of the litter.  Love you, darlin'.

A

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SEA

I am glad that you liked this one.  I do so enjoy your poetry and comments.  You often make my day.

A

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GS

You are beautiful.  One of my favorite beautiful people of PiP (Sounds like a pinup, huh)

A

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