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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-11-12 03:08 PM


Foolish Choices

I'd like to go
to a place
where there's no pain
or suffering,
but I know
thats not possible
because everytime
I find myself close
my choices
take me back.

This is not
meant to say
that my life
is full of suffering.

More precisely,
foolish choices
are a source of
fuel for suffering.

JamesLee
11November
2007





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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-12 03:11 PM


JamesMichael-

this shouldn't be true, i dont believe it is. sometimes when i write, i like to create a place while I am writting, and that poem will be that place, have fun with it, if you choose to do that kind of a poem, it will work, trust me!

ARCTIC WIND

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2007-11-13 12:21 PM


James

You write words that I understand.
For that, I thank you.

Alison

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2007-11-13 03:42 AM


Exactly.....!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-11-13 08:28 AM


"foolish choices
are a source of
fuel for suffering."

~ Aye, there's the rub! To do ~ or not to do!


Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-11-14 12:27 PM


well said James ... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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