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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-11-12 02:06 PM


Dawn shatters night blackness, raining dark against dark,
over the warmth of covers that muffle the chill,
casting shadows on bright squares of a quilted garden.

Dried snowflakes, robbed of moisture, drift slowly,
       dancing in air currents,
only to fall into immobility, paralyzed  by winter’s cruel reality.

                 and I?

I look to the frosted window and see your face
as the heat of your breath makes holes for eyes
intently gazing into the hollows of my soul.

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Alison

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2007-11-12 02:21 PM


ooOOoOoO very nice sweetie!  I like!

~Sheli~

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Gaia
2 posted 2007-11-12 02:40 PM


Applause, once again. A very wonderful snapshot!
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
3 posted 2007-11-12 05:27 PM


mmmmmmm yes ms, this one rocks
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2007-11-12 07:19 PM


Extremely captivating soul watching, dear Alison!

Love,
Margherita

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-11-12 11:17 PM


Sheli

I do so love when you stop in to read something I share with you.  You know that I love you, dahlink.  Yep, I do.

Ali

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Kacy,

You made me really smile today.  I value your thoughts and opinions because I admire you a great deal as a poet.  And plus -- well we share a history of location. That's kinda cool on its own.

Thank you.
Alison

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DS

Thank you for rockin' with my words.  

A

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Margherita,

You are among the crowd of the most kind and thoughtful on these blue pages, my friend.  You are a lovely woman and thank you for enjoying and stopping to share your thoughts.

Hugs,
Alison

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-11-15 03:34 AM


Nice...James
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2007-11-15 04:14 AM


James,

Thank you.

A

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