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HopeS
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0 posted 2007-11-10 12:36 PM



Like The Ones We Write

Would open arms be awaiting
If we ever met one day
Would our words flow easily
In knowing what to say

Would the desire be conveyed
When holding my hand
Would our heart's be racing
As we lay upon the sand

Would we caress side by side
Capturing sensual bliss
Would we embrace tenderly
Lingering on each kiss

Would our longings be fulfilled
While enjoying the fun
Would depths of love be felt
As we bask in the sun

Would our eyes gaze knowing
Feeling passions ignite
Would we fulfill each fantasy
Like the ones we write

HopeĀ©2007

The poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91011540.html

© Copyright 2007 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-11-10 04:19 PM


wow I love this poem it was so sweet and well... amazing
Krysti

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-11-10 06:38 PM


beautiful Hope... just like you! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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3 posted 2007-11-10 07:40 PM


We write from the heart and passion's express
It's sad but each day does deliver much less
It's dreaming and hoping that helps us go on
Not truths that we meet and ponder upon

So questions at large, I don't believe so
Unless we are blessed and happiness know
I believe it's our dreaming that shows what we see
That lets us imagine how life it should be

Enjoyed your write my friend, thank you for sharing and the inspiration.

Rick

[This message has been edited by Rick (11-10-2007 09:03 PM).]

LindsayP
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4 posted 2007-11-10 07:45 PM



That is a delightful poem Hope but it is what we have learnt to expect from you.

Very romantic, much enjoyed. Take care

Lindsay

Margherita
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5 posted 2007-11-11 08:24 AM


Would our eyes gaze knowing
Feeling passions ignite
Would we fulfill each fantasy
Like the ones we write


Ah yes, that's the question, dear Hope.
I believe what dances in our minds tends to realize itself. That's the target, isn't it?

Beautiful poem!

Love,
Margherita

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