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openmind
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since 2007-11-05
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0 posted 2007-11-10 02:45 AM



"fear" only GOD himself
"succeed" to prosper with wealth
"love" never at first sight
"attraction" I met her the other night
"family" I hold so dear to me
"friends" not many left, maybe only three
"life" it's not overrated just harder than I thought
"fame" it is overrated solitude cannot be bought
"stress" I strain myself to death
"patience" I don't have much left
"drive" It's in me but where am I going
"ambition" full of it but down a path no knowing
"beauty" it's all around you just look
"hatred" dwarfs beauty and he's a crook
"smile" something that brightens my day
"peace" if only I pray

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-11-10 06:40 PM


i like this!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2007-11-10 07:29 PM


I like it when truths are told and expressed from the heart, thank you for sharing this my friend, I did enjoy.

Rick

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2007-11-11 09:32 AM


Perfect in the delivery and perspective...
I enjoyed this very much.

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