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Speed Eats
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Speed Eats |
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Shadow_Singer Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 51 |
Always going, going, gone; Busy doing, doing, done; She ate more often in her car Than the dining room at her home; Nibbling while going near or far, Eating, driving, and going all alone. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Are you speaking of a "carrier woman"? It fits perfectly! And some day it might be too late to savour the precious moments of life ... like a meal enjoyed as it should be enjoyed. You did a great job here! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You did a great job of working this piece. Great message. Enjoyed this verse. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Always going, going, gone; Busy doing, doing, done; yes, life can be like this.. we should be slowing, slowing, stop some of the time - enjoyed this poem of yours my friend  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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