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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2007-11-09 09:10 PM


A question haunts my mind:
Why is it OK for a soldier
to kill people
but not OK for a Civilian!
to do the same thing?

Civilian killers are called murderers
but why?
Because they kill the wrong people?
Soldiers are called heroes,
Is that because they kill the right people?

An interesting distinction –
completely lost on me.
Who determines who is the wrong victim
of murder;
who is the right one?

It wouldn’t be (perish the thought)
our wonderful, moral, trustworthy
politicians now, would it?
Well, yes, that is who!
The very same liars and robbers
we elect time after time,
knowing that each time
the taxes will go up
and benefits come down;
the poor will become poorer
and the rich become the super rich.

Murder is murder however you slice it!

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-11-09 09:16 PM


It takes Kahunas Grandes to post this one.
I'd swear you were reading my 'debate notes' from my own anti-war diaries!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2007-11-09 09:23 PM


Whether one can fully agree with the content of this
'write' or not...it does contain powerfully stated
points and opinions!

I will 're-post' here...what I had 'replied' on another 'write'
(from earlier today):

[at least in the past, some wars were likely
  absolutely necessary/unavoidable and perhaps
  justified! (stopping Hitler; etc.)...instead of
  just being 'invented' to satisfy the relentless
  ego and private intent of major politicians who
  are (in simultaneity) incredibly minuscule
  statesmen and human beings!]
                              ~

Shadow_Singer
Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 51

3 posted 2007-11-09 09:27 PM



Need distinction?
You are on a sidewalk one way is a police officer with a drawn gun
The other a dirty thug with a drawn gun
Which way do you run?

Only a simplistic mind would attempt to equate the military to murderers,
Please grow up and start thinking.

You don’t remember the past, else you’d know the why,
Another poor product of the modern school system.
Read your history, start with WWII
Then go backwards.

Should be easy for such a backwards thinker.

PS I don’t object to the objection to the Rich pilfering from this war,
Just leave the Soldier out of it.


secondhanddreampoet
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Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2007-11-09 09:41 PM


Let's also try coming forward from W.W. II:
Those of us who are stuck with remembering Nam
too damn well...as soldiers or civilian advisors; etc.
[particularly if one happened to witness a friend
unable to stand because he was repeatedly
slipping and falling on his own intestines while
trying to get them back in his abdomen]...might
think about taking issue with this 'write'...and also
have severe difficulty mentioning that MANY of the
'military' most assuredly did become 'murderers'
there... (understandable, but not justifiable!)...
yet, that should be re-stressed for folks that 'sing' in
shadows and make personal remarks about
others who have every right to state their opinions
about such a topic!

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18
Posts 498

5 posted 2007-11-11 11:12 AM


This write asks questions that need to be asked. Those of us who experienced the draft in the Vietnam era asked many of the same questions as those today who query invented wars for profit. Norman Mailer, now gone from this mortal plane at an interesting moment, Veterans Day weekend, spoke to many of these same issues in his books. His last, Castle in the Forest, explored the nature of evil. When you follow the money trail, you get some answers -- some, but not all. WW - Fine write and excellent questions.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2007-11-14 03:17 PM


I don't think you're the backwards thinker WindWalker, More likely you're a little too evolved for the present world. And brave enough to say what some others know in their hearts to be true.
                                   Ida

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18
Posts 498

7 posted 2007-11-15 01:46 PM


Mark Twain's War Prayer, aka War Poem aims to raise similar consciousness in the reader.

You may read it at the following link:
http://www.geocities.com/Athens/4824/war-prayer.htm  

Found among his unpublished works, it was considered as relevant last evening, debated among artists of many kinds, as it was the day he wrote it more than a century ago.

WW, I think Sam Clemens would applaud your poem. He told friends he didn't have the courage to publish this during his lifetime.  

[This message has been edited by ArtSolstice (11-15-2007 03:42 PM).]

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