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luminosity
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0 posted 2007-11-09 04:25 PM


You led, I followed.
I tried not to question when the path
we traversed crossed under the edge
where tears crash down.
Soaked and sometimes stumbling
and most times in
way over my head
You never let go
or gave up on me
and I
have yet to sink.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-11-09 05:23 PM


"and I
have yet to sink."

~ nor will you ever sink, Luminous One.

There are times when we must have faith and follow those who will keep us safe. It appears that you have someone worth following until you get your 'wings' back.

Loving hug,
EA

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

2 posted 2007-11-09 06:03 PM


EA,thank you, for me following Jesus is not hard...course if someone told me, don't look down, you are walking on water...I might falter...so I only listen to the positive...which is exactly what I hear from you
thank you

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-11-09 07:04 PM


Sweetheart, with an attitude like yours...
you'll never be exploited when you show your
true side. And honey? That side is always
looking at the positive...even when it is a
brick wall...

for they are only temporary...and the best
thing about a brick wall? Is figuring out
whether going around them on the left, or
the right, will be the best choice.




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