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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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0 posted 2007-11-08 01:40 PM



   SOON....
There's an idea tiptoeing around in my mind,
A verse that is forming one line at a time.
It will not be hurried
But not to worry
Soon it will appear on my paper
By way of my pen.
Soon......
I just don't know when.
                  Ida

© Copyright 2007 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-11-08 02:12 PM


Big smiles and hugs
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-11-08 02:27 PM


Reminds me of a phone conversation I had with my girlfriend...she said she wanted to tell me something but her mouth wasn't ready to speak the words, or something like that...but the truth followed...James
Connel
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3 posted 2007-11-08 02:32 PM


Haha, I like this.

We've all been in times where we can't find ourselves inspired to write about anything, or can't quite find words. Nicely done.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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4 posted 2007-11-08 02:34 PM


Aha! A teaser for what is yet to come! lol

You're adorable, did anyone ever tell you that? ~ but of course!

Loving hug 'n a big smile,

Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2007-11-08 04:01 PM


There's an idea tiptoeing around in my mind

I love this line, dear Ida, it holds the joy of anticipation.

Ok then, soon ...

Love,
Margherita



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2007-11-09 12:33 PM


enjoyed this piece from you dear poet! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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