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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Unfold underneath a might oak there are countless letters now leaves against the wind once pages and pages I didn’t send a diary of one heart ink of a soul whispers to a shadow where secrets there unfold "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
how absolutely beautiful! pages ... leaves ... wondrous thoughts unfold from your pen. Love, Margherita  |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
Wow such nice imagery in this poem, a pleasure to read. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
...collecting leaves |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lady, hello, it's so good to read you again...and as always, you leave me feeling at a loss for words...as yours are artfully articulated... Hugs Me |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful imagery, Lady Ida |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"a diary of one heart" Helen you never cease to amaze me hugs to you |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' is quite fine! I am especially fond of the lines: "a diary of one heart ink of a soul whispers to a shadow" serious, sustained applause!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I really like the feel of this one...leaves me wanting more. *hugs*....jo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Helen.. I do so like this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantabulous! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
really much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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