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Imprinted in snow
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Imprinted in snow |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Imprinted in snow *** Cold thin air and self-conscious laughter left us breathless and with hurting chests as we conquered the quiet top of the hill hand in hand exchanging energy waves our footprint designs revealing to the skies our secret intentions, dreams and desires playing hide and seek on the virgin lawn the white blanket reverberating in our eyes inhaling our love vapors and exhaling sighs lips seeking to seal to keep treasured within the sweet flow of hush-hush words of lovers to stumble over in mind blowing emotion landing tightly entwined upon the softness of the glistening queen size snow flake bed where we quenched our thirst at love’s fountain surrounded by the glow of purity and innocence we melted into each other and left for the stars on shuttles of ice traveling at light speed to revive the divine connection of our souls while our bodies remained imprinted in snow waiting to be awakened from dream slumber by the warm and loving touch of dawn. *** |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Oh Margherita, this really is sssssssoooooooo beautiful!! Your wording really is quite exquisite and I could literally 'feel' each one of their steps..... wonderful. Illusive x |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I hope that snowy quilt was warm. It's as if the ocean froze over~  ~ quite suited to your snow angels. I got goosebumps reading this!  The picture and the poem are both dreamscapes of infinite possibility. ~ KL |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
we melted into each other and left for the stars on shuttles of ice traveling at light speed to revive the divine connection of our souls while our bodies remained imprinted in snow waiting to be awakened from dream slumber by the warm and loving touch of dawn. oh Margherita ... truly beautifully written! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..you make lovely water from the snow sides of your poetry..enjoyed it |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful visuals expressed, in fact for me it brought back memories of long ago I used to love leaving prints in the first fall of snow Hope |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!' I particularly like: "shuttles of ice traveling at light speed to revive the divine connection of our souls while our bodies remained imprinted in snow waiting to be awakened from dream slumber by the warm and loving touch of dawn." applause!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Another marvelous piece of romantic writing! I truly am a die-hard fan of your inestimable talent. Your poetry engages my senses, my mind, my emotions, my spirit, my imagination ~ and at times, my body! lol The smile that reading your poem put on my face, is still beaming!  Love to you, Margherita! Linda  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Margherita you flow with energy, wisdom and love...this was extremely well written...and I loved it, and the greatness of it. Hugs and love and many thanks Lee J. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...fine...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Margherita..a great and romantic write here... Enjoyed the energy you got from the snow and the heart beating flow as it moved along.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Poet friends for the generous and loving replies, you bring a smile, just in time to go drifting off to dreamland ... Snow and the wonderfully unique snowflakes hold such incredible fascination. Love, Margherita  |
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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
Im speechless. Your use of vocabulary is amazing. And the overall stitching to put the poem together is wonderful. Beautiful for lack of words. |
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Khe Iem Junior Member
since 2007-10-14
Posts 25 |
Lovely. Khe Iem |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"we melted into each other and left for the stars on shuttles of ice traveling at light speed to revive the divine connection of our souls while our bodies remained imprinted in snow" Now, that is what I call really making a snow angel! (Hope that just isn't an American terminology--snow angel, that is). Lovely love. *hugs*....jo |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
A really great poem. You make the reader feel as if in a field of new fallen snow. Very nice. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all for letting me know you enjoyed it. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An outstanding, beautiful write! I loved this: "we melted into each other and left for the stars on shuttles of ice traveling at light speed" WHOOOHOOO! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
oh margherita- this is a very good poem ! i love it so much, i want it for myself, i will save you on fav poems ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Kacy and dear Arctic Wind for your generous comments. Have a wonderful Sunday! Love, Margherita |
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