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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-11-06 06:17 AM



it is always the morning trains
that seem to have the rear view mirrors
and bend around a too slow curve
giving one time to see tomorrow
when her back is turned

you gave me a kiss blanket then
to keep my ice from melting slow
convenience is lucky who it knows
and who it chooses to forget
when one wakes from her urges

to find another stone in her bed
that kept her from sleeping easy
and left a bruise or two below
where her ankles were waves
crashing on some handy sandy man

just two stop lights from mosey


__________

daark

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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2007-11-06 01:23 PM


I've got to mosey down the roads
you've left a trail of crumbs
upon, and see all that
you've written, m'friend...

it's been too long.




Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-11-06 04:44 PM


I detect the melancholy creeping through your words and I'd rather stay on the hilltop to keep out of the blues.

A most wondrous poem.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2007-11-06 05:41 PM


ms sun....hi lady friend..you should come back before calif drifts into some other ocean..thanks lady

_________

ms mar, no melons...just collies..lol, barking all night at the wind chimes, thanks ms

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-11-07 07:31 PM


just lovely Mr Daark... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-11-08 06:18 AM


ms R & B, thanks lady!!
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