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Revolving Door |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Revolving Door By Paul Wilson You’d think my heart has a revolving door the way you come and go at will I’ve heard…I love you so many times when you need me or you’re looking for time to kill Fancy this if you would me saying no and walking away I’m tired of being your puppet on a string playing those silly love games you play Tomorrow you’ll be on the outside looking in wishing the door to my heart would open again Perhaps you’ll wonder why I act like a stranger when we meet… never smiling not even a grin One lonely silhouette on the wall where there use to be two One heart is breaking from the memory of you I’d sooner die than let you see me cry so my teardrops I’ll conceal with the rain I’d open the door to my heart if I could find the key then I ask myself…why suffer the pain ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"One lonely silhouette on the wall where there use to be two One heart is breaking from the memory of you" ~ oh, the loneliness ~ the heartache... You captured those feelings, so well. That vivid image is still imprinted upon my mind as I am writing this reply.  Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 C'mere you.Sometimes it's just like Lucy smiling sweetly while Charlie Brown reluctantly tries to kick the ball again... I benched m'self this weekend too. (I know another kicker who oughtta be benched, but HOW about that Drew Brees, eh?) Love you Paullie! MUAH  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Linda...Glad you related to this. Thanks for your kind words. Finally I am getting out of my not writting rut, two in two days, thats gotta be a record LOL...Paul Karen...I can always count on you to bring a smile to my face. ( Charile Brown & Lucy ) Thanks so much for everything...Paul About that kicker, whats the deal? They had what I thought was a good one and they dump him for the chump we got now. Someone needs to have a talk with ole Tom Benson. Drew is the man...he can chunk that ball. That was a great confidence builder for the team. ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I’d sooner die than let you see me cry so my teardrops I’ll conceal with the rain" Great write Paul! Love this line. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow I can relate to much to this Hearts revolving door Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Paul, it is so good to see you and read you again...but on such a sad note... yanno, I don't think it's fair that men feel like they can't cry, but to, in this situation, surely I can grasp the reasons why Hugs and love to you Lee J. |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Hi Paul, This is the first time I have read your work and I have to say that your construction, usage of words and the general feeling of the message being conveyed is very concise. An really good piece. Illusive x |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Paul you do write sadness so as it hits the heart. Best to yo. "late" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This hurts, dear Paul! Tears shed, even if in loneliness, will help the emotional storm to calm down. Intense write. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Paul... a very sad, but very beautifully expressed write. I'm good at giving hugs if you would like one ? RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
All...Thanks so much for your sweet replies and for caring. Sometimes I just open my heart up a little too much and get hurt by others and other times its my own fault for caring so much. I know the person this was written for will never read it but it helps me to open up a little. Thanks again so much for your support and the hugs...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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