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vandana
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0 posted 2007-11-05 11:34 AM



I understand why?
Why you didn't love me?
I understand,
You had to leave me,
I understand,
I do,
I understand,
But I also understand why?
Why I keep falling in love
With you,
And you don't love me anymore,
I understand why?
The rain keep falling,
And the sun is still there,
Sometimes,
The sun shines
when the sun is out,
And I understand why?
And a rainbow appears,
I understand why?
I understand it all,
I wish I could,
I understand......


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Brian23
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1 posted 2007-11-05 11:55 AM


I like your poem a lot. I can easily relate which is something I like in a poem.
Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2007-11-05 12:03 PM


Vandana...Sounds like a soulful blusey sound to me, which I really love that type of lyrics. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-05 01:34 PM


Nice writing...James
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