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Thoughts From A Winters Morn |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Thoughts From A Winters. Morn By Paul Wilson (Fooling around with a different style) I know we’ve met before you bring back memories was it at the local store perhaps on an ocean breeze or another place and time while sharing a glass of wine The air about you is all aglow your eyes shine like ten thousand stars without introduction your name I know just like memories and renoirs hidden by my heart…out of sight your memory still shines bright Passage of time serves me well love we shared covered in stone Your future I can tell afraid of being left alone Winters grip leaves me cold as together we grow old I will be there for you because of the love we share take my hand start anew remember how much I care I will never stop trying let me dry the tears you are crying ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-04-2007 12:51 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the new style, Paul~~ some very touching feelings there M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul, the entire poem is noteworthy, however, these exquisite lines stand out for me. "without introduction your name I know just like memories and renoirs" This stretch of your poetic wings, suits you well!  Loving hug, Linda  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Paul, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Lindsay |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow Paul!! I like the new format. Great write my friend. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ A lovely read this Monday morn~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Thanks for the read & reply. I sort of wanted to blend rhyme with free verse and see what came out. I think I will try and make a few changes later...Paul Linda...Glad you liked those lines. Thanks so much for your comments. Trying to expand my writting ability, so if it stinks please let me know...Paul LindsayP...Thanks, Glad you like it...Paul JL...Thanks my friend for taking time to read and for your kind words of support. Take Care...Paul Marge...Thanks for taking time to read and reply. You are very much appreciated...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
hi Paul, The poem takes me two place...the past and the future. Aren't memories strangely wonderful phenomenon. We would have no past without them and not on which to dream for a future because we would not remember it once it arrived either. Then to think of eternity of infinity where all is without beginning or end seems to set past, present and future all in the same consciousness of now, and love just IS. I enjoyed your poem, and the glimpse of your heart! ~ Karen |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Klassy...Glad you enjoyed the journey this took you on. Sometime I get a little side tracked and my poems go in different directions, but glad you could see thru that.I really appreciate the read & reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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