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peterpoetry
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0 posted 2007-11-04 09:42 AM


Every Day, Mysterious

Every day I brush shoulders with another universe
A potential wife, a new best friend,
Someone who’d make my life miserable.
I scan the faces on the bus
Without a clue as to what it is I’m looking for
But regardless I always find it,
I’m just not sure what it is
Or what I am to do with all these feelings
With the loneliness that travels through my blood
To every part of my body
Or the joy that comes from seeing a girl
I’ve never met in my life
And know I’ll never speak to.
Every day I wake up the same way I fall asleep
In a swoon, intoxicated, in love,
I can’t help it, I’ve fallen in love with the universe
And all I’d like as I drift amongst creation
Is someone to hold on to, someone not afraid of the mysterious.


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lightkeeper
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pluto
1 posted 2007-11-04 10:17 AM


Wow ! I enjoyed reading your poem

Thank you and welcome to pip


Lightkeeper

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-11-04 10:28 AM


this is good. Enjoyed

welcome to PIPtalk.com

your blog....good too. I'll read more later

Tomtoo

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-11-04 02:33 PM


Hello, there, Peter! Welcome to our circle of kindred spirits!

I loved the following line! ~

"I’ve fallen in love with the universe"

...and as you "drift amongst creation" may you find "someone to hold on to, someone not afraid of the mysterious."

I checked out your Poetry Corner ~ and those were great poems!!!

I also noted that you are An American In Paris! ~ Ooops, that's the name of a movie! lol You're an American (student) in Dublin!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel


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