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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-11-02 12:59 PM



          

Kiss this heart,
with your words,
tie them in a knot,

Dust your magic,
cover my body,
with angel dust,

make me whole,
pure as light,
for your tree,

On the top,
beneath me,
I leave gifts,

Christmas everyday,
your angel,
your love,

You have the power,
to make it happen,
touch me,

and it will be so...



You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-11-02 01:48 PM


Consider yourself touched

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Shadow_Singer
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2 posted 2007-11-02 02:13 PM


You have a way with a phrase, a very nice way.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-11-03 03:35 AM


WOW~Thank you interloper I am blessed! Help me put on the halo and wings...please!

~ARH


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-11-03 03:37 AM


Shadow Singer~ Welcome...nice to meet you!

Your compliments are deeply appreciated!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-11-04 04:42 AM


This is fine romantic writing...James
LindsayP
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6 posted 2007-11-04 11:32 PM



Quite a romantic write Romantic Heart

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

JL
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7 posted 2007-11-05 04:57 AM


Very romantic.
JL

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8 posted 2007-11-05 11:17 AM


good read
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