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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-11-02 06:46 AM



maybe it is the curiosity
when you turn over stones
in your evening gown

stopping traffic in an instant
and asking me questions
about what is on the other side

of the road I would lead you down
or would we even cross completely
maybe just stay in the middle

and go both ways together
chasing the parked cars we missed
riding in when we were younger

or parking in cars we hurried in
and wanted to spend more time knowing
from the inside out without

the protection of our lover's gloves on


_______________
daak

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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-11-02 07:38 AM


Enjoyed...the title reminded me of anothre..."Sunshine Superman"...a song sung by Donovan many years ago...James
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2007-11-02 07:50 AM


I won't pretend to understand your work. However I do enjoy the read
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

3 posted 2007-11-02 10:00 AM



you attract, fly-paper strong
she flits, lands lightly,
lingers...curious
your super glue love

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2007-11-02 10:00 AM


"and asking me questions
about what is on the other side

of the road I would lead you down
or would we even cross completely
maybe just stay in the middle

and go both ways together
chasing the parked cars we missed
riding in when we were younger"

as long as the road leads to beaches.....

[This message has been edited by SEA (11-02-2007 10:58 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-11-02 04:58 PM


friend james, thank you sir

_________

interloper, thank you for just looking in


__________

ms kahlil, bless you for your eyes, they always make me look northward

___________

ms suesea...there is an ocean waiting lady friend, always an ocean waiting

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2007-11-03 06:51 AM


or parking in cars we hurried in
and wanted to spend more time knowing
from the inside out without

the protection of our lover's gloves on

yes... that would be nice Mr Daark!  enjoyed!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
7 posted 2007-11-03 06:53 AM


ms R & B thank you lady!!
Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2007-11-03 07:35 AM


quote:
wanted to spend more time knowing
from the inside out without

the protection of our lover's gloves on




... if only we could walk this path of discovery in time it would give such pleasure and also comfort!

I do enjoy so much your poetic performances, dear D.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
9 posted 2007-11-03 09:42 AM


ms mar, thank you for looking in the windows here
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
10 posted 2007-11-04 01:29 AM




"chasing the parked cars we missed
riding in when we were younger"

smack in the middle of the road
that's the best place
stranger darlin'

lead on

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
11 posted 2007-11-04 07:37 AM


ladyone...corner of there and here..with the lights on and hungry..yes ms, and thank you for   stopping by
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